Caitlin:
Sound
I have used some of the sounds from the actual recording on the edit, such as the beeping of the card and the sound of the door opening. Other sounds like footsteps have been found, but haven't been put on there yet. The soundtrack has not been added either.
Camera
Half of the shots were filmed by me and the others by Charlie.
MES
The location, props and costume was a decision made by both me and Charlie.
Improvements
There is still a lot that needs to be improved, such as more sound effects added and the titles and colouring grading needs to be added.
Charlie:
Edit
At this moment in time, The editing is very limited. Some titles have been uploads and a few effects have been added to the first couple of sequences. With running behind schedule, its been difficult to catch up but i have been staying behind after school and completing the editing in some spare time.
At this moment in time, The editing is very limited. Some titles have been uploads and a few effects have been added to the first couple of sequences. With running behind schedule, its been difficult to catch up but i have been staying behind after school and completing the editing in some spare time.
Camera
Half the shots were filmed by me and the others by Caitlin.
MES
The location along with props and costumes etc was a mutual agreement between us.
The location along with props and costumes etc was a mutual agreement between us.
Improvements
We have loads to improve. I still need to edit which includes adding the colour grading & text. I also need to help with the sound.
Overall:
High Level 2 ??
Overall:
High Level 2 ??
"The group must invest greater time in capturing appropriate footage on location to complete their video, remembering to use close ups. Their film is at only 60 per cent of run time and requires titles and sound."
ReplyDeleteIm concerned that there is no sound or full titles. You must act now by staying after school to complete this to deadline.
You have some interesting shots here but there is a lack of justification that you need to follow up - why the bible, and who/what is her target? Why is she being watched? This is the extra footage we need to capture. The bomb looks far better.
You ought to go to a city to establish and external shot of an important looking building to juxtapose with the shots you have an make this more convincing. Also - where is the suspense - couldn't the countdown be now set and have the target escaping?
Why have you not graded this?
X (unable to assess)